some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the tourism industry is development more and more from many countries. But there are a lot of idea for culture issue of visitors who travelling to other countries. It is sometimes argued that visitors to other countries should compliance with local customs and behaviors. However, other people encourage host country should welcome cultural differences from other countries. This essay has tried to cover both the mentioned views and will suggest many solution for this issue.
On the one hand, many people think that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviors. This is not wrong. When visitors come to any countries, they can learn new things from custom a cultures at this country where they are travelling. For example, visitors from USA go to travelling in Vietnam. They can play traditional activities such as fire dancing, traditional dancing ... They can wear traditional clothes of mountain peoples. I am really sure that they will feel interesting if we can integrate cultural together.
On the other hand, other people think that host country should welcome cultural differences. i complete agree with the opinion. People can learn new things from tourists and it can helpful for development of society. Everyone should honor own cultural of among different countries. Moreover, many country are competing with each other for the tourism industry. So, they should be responding for tourists if they do not want to losses in this competition.
In my opinion, visitors always want to learn new things when travelling to new places. So, host country can encourage them follow to local customs and behaviours. We can integrate with each other to known more knowledge in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
...th the mentioned views and will suggest many solution for this issue. On the one hand, many ...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a culture' or simply 'cultures'?
Suggestion: a culture; cultures
..., they can learn new things from custom a cultures at this country where they are travelli...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ry should welcome cultural differences. i complete agree with the opinion. People...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ry should welcome cultural differences. i complete agree with the opinion. People...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23826714801 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533175117 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7568676195 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0952380952 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1904761905 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36903635939 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126526569452 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150095990935 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249504982583 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721173236751 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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