Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is often a discussion of interest and contention, as certain individuals holds on to the perspective that knowledge from our primitive age is useless in our contemporary life, although, some are of the contrary opinion that ancient documentations are important outlet of data to know better about human existent. In this essay, I will explain the two sides then give my opinion.
Talking about history, it have become a major aspect of human existence, to highlight its important why don't you ask yourself why history is being study as a course in school if it isn't important?. Not only did it gives us an insight about how to identify and avoid problems it also provide a quick solution to problem because it would have highlighted ineffective methods which you can avoid.
On the other hand, I tend to ask myself of what importance is knowing the past head of states and president of my countries, how they lived there lives and how and when they died if such knowledge will not in anyway put food on my table. This singular aspect undermine the important of history in our current living.
Having looked at the both view, I am still of the opinion that history plays a principal role in our present day life. The saying "knowledge is power" which have became very popular wouldn't have been well known if not proven right. To illustrate, a friend of mine died after eating a poisonous specie of mushroom because he lacks the historical knowledge of it poisonous nature, same knowledge that have been impacted into me by my grand mother. So, the important of primitive knowledge cannot be over emphasized because it saves one a lot of troubles and also help in effective problem solving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, so, still, then, well, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71593261547 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4411328889 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123452441593 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521957849859 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514707256829 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076346480116 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487841763034 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.