Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that the usage of computers will eliminate the necessity for people to visit public museums and art galleries to see objects and pieces of art relating to history. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this view.
Visiting a museum or gallery in person provides a unique and immersive experience that cannot be replicated by viewing images on a piece of technology. In other words, viewing an artwork or item enables viewers to fully comprehend its scale, texture, and materiality, as well as its historical and cultural context. In doing this, the audiences may learn some meaningful lessons. For example, a visit to Con Dao prison helps visitors better understand the hardships and crimes of war caused to the Vietnamese people, from which they will appreciate the peace they have today.
Furthermore, museums and galleries serve an important role in preserving and protecting cultural heritage. Without public institutions to gather, store, and show historical artifacts and works of art, there is a danger that these items would eventually be lost or destroyed. Therefore, by collecting and housing these artifacts in a controlled environment, institutions can protect them from this risk. Additionally, they can ensure that the objects are properly cared for and maintained, which can help extend their lifespan and prevent them from deteriorating over time.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that going to public museums and art galleries provides people with individual experiences and preserves cultural assets for future generations in a way that a computer cannot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions in a way that a computer cannot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37647058824 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92849553879 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3290520069 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302599655807 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102261223814 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112065136702 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197013470912 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108723293796 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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