Some people believe that not all prisoners should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or not?
Many people think that prisoners should be allowed to do some part-time unpaid works which will improve their mental condition. I agree with this view, but I think that rather than doing unpaid work, they should be involved in low-paid works so that they will be motivated to work more.
Keeping all the prisoners in jail is not only costly for the government but also bad for the prisoners. If a person is kept in jail for many years without the involvement in physical work, he will not only suffer from mental disorder, but also suffer from physical weaknesses. But, if he is involved in any outside work, he will be in touch with many good people and his mental stress will be lower. It is likely that after getting the bail, he will be a good person.
Although many people argue that prisoners should not get paid for their works as they are criminals, I think that they should get a small payment for their work as it will increase their motivation to work hard. Besides, they can save this money which will help them meet their expenses after getting release. However, authority should be very careful before selecting the prisoners who will be allowed to do job as serious criminals might do harms to the society. Another noticeable benefits from allowing the prisoners to work is that over the period of imprisonment, they will be skilled in a particular area which will help them get job after getting bail.
In conclusion, some prisoners should be permitted to do low-paid jobs that will not only keep them happy mentally but also make them productive for future.
- In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 73
- The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Many people think that companies or private institutions should take the responsibility of cleaning the waste in the environment, not the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free?Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72563176895 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35232285747 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483754512635 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3795174308 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389255740776 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175090996111 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120050618069 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279351629496 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108609883628 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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