Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
Many people often think money was the significant matter to buy a new product or get an act. However, in this essay, I strongly agree with the statement because, people need to consider the amount of money they are spending for each goods, whether it need or not and the outcome which must be cost effective.
Firstly, people have the tends to buy product by the influence of advertisement and peer pressure. On such circumstances, people must think about the cost which is affordable to them and overwhelming financial crisis, monthly yield, and escalating inflation would makes up the double thinking of shopping. Common man has the liability to treat all the family needs wealthy and climbing prices of innovative devices may lead to the crucial phenomenon in cost involvement thinks and check the alternative of product. For example, novel gadgets have high rate in market to cope with that search instead of costly items than cheaper quality product intellectually.
Secondly, every one has the right to get treatment or other health care services in at least once in a life. Owing to the fact that people wish to get perfect predominant services, while, hiking service charges, consultation fees would make people to judge over prices to achieve them. In general, bandwagon systems, ingenious machines insisting authority to credit money over customers to the core. So as to, in every citizen may have the crucial thinking towards the expenses which may occur in such circumstances and save money for emergency purposes.
To conclude, money is an essential factor when going for a purchase on costly products or service. Although, get ride of extra expenditure for certain unnecessary things may help to deliberate purchasing crisis is that often thinks many.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...y yield, and escalating inflation would makes up the double thinking of shopping. Com...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...redit money over customers to the core. So as to, in every citizen may have the crucial ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, at least, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14186851211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72759191701 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640138408304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0557569703 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166598048633 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578379927658 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034286844445 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944045527952 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244559106969 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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