Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often considered that, prohibiting all kinds of adverts might advantageous for the society. However, in this essay strongly disagree with the statement because, advertisement services would helps many people in various ways. Such as, awareness, health education, innovative ideas, trends and so on.
Advertisement industry was burgeoning in modern world to share ingenious programs regarding agricultural, preventive and precautions and novel fashion ideas. Firstly, sharing new kinds of crops and peasant support methods would reached to he common people by the help of advertisements. Secondly, many disease prevention precautions are expressed through some sort of ads. Finally, changing trends and trades mostly promoted to the public by the indispensable ability of advertisements. There by, mitigating or removing all types of ads would have been detrimental effect inside the society to the core.
In fact, banning certain kinds of provoking ads might helpful to the society in some extent. For instance, promoting ads of beverages and cigarettes, kind of cosmetics, energy drinks would be harmful to the people. Get ride of such problems could be limited by alternative methods other than forbidden of many educative adverts. On the other hand, make use of subliminal adverts would may mitigate the common sense, and probably made significant variation in behaviour. For instance, promotion sale of camel cigarette. At once, censoring such annoying publicity of materials and products, rather than controlling total vanishing of adverts.
To sum up, government can take action against irritating or fruitless adverts irrespective of products. Whereas,of complete removal ads make negative impacts on people and there by country as a whole. In my perception, discrimination of advertisement would be more suitable than altogether outlawed of ads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: reach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95698924731 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07199615321 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2072379346 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112257955781 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321442772075 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401653338846 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631767584418 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010036298661 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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