Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals argue, that it is a good thing for managing directors to have high incomes rather than other employees. In my opinion, I agree that high-position of managers deserve more wages because of their work.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason for higher wages of managers in senior positions is that responsibility. To elaborate, the company manager has to take many decisions accurately for their work and, supervise how employers work under them to handle the company. For instance, Google's CEO(chief executive officer) Sundar Pichai is working hard for the company. Consequently, because of their better decisions, google is popular in the world.
Secondly, another reason behind the better income of the manager is higher education and knowledge. In other words, the company accepts employees who are highly qualified in their education and then decides which position is suitable for them. Moreover, knowledge is performed an essential role in the workplace. For example, if a superior worker in the company has abandoned information about their work so he explains it to their subordinates in a great way. As a result, ordinary workers respect their seniors and do finer work.
Finally, one more justification for the high payout for managers is that they are the motivation for sub-workers. To explain, Ordinary workers are inspired by their seniors due to their position and income because of this they not only work hard but also the company will be in profit. Hence, the system will work accurately.
In recapitulation, senior managers perform a vital role in the company because they have many responsibilities and workloads. So, the company must pay them high compared to other employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a great way" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...so he explains it to their subordinates in a great way. As a result, ordinary workers respect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86790868597 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7279215041 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240544751978 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845008186031 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590888105778 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152369185973 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331769953815 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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