Some people consider sport to be their career in society. For others, it is mostly a workout to keep fit.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the past decades, sports have had a growing influence in the modern world, which could now be taken as a job or as a hobby. While for many people, sports are just a way to get them in shape, there are some whose occupations are related to sports. Personally, I am on the former side and in this essay, I will discuss both opinions.
On one hand, professional sports players are those who have a passion for sports. They can use their talent to earn money and furthermore, to gain fame. For instance, Messi and Ronaldo, who are brilliant footballers, are both famous for playing football for several years and become the symbols of the football world. Moreover, sports players can bring glory to their nation through international games like the Olympics or World Cup. Take Anh Vien as an example, she is the champion of SEA GAME 2005 which helped Vietnam get the first gold medal in swimming after ten years of waiting.
On the other hand, not everyone has the ability to play sports for a living, so they just take it as a pleasure. The most persuasive reason for the popularity of sports is that it helps the players improve both mental and physical health. If playing soccer or tennis can make your body fitter and improve your health, then yoga and meditation can help you relax and reduce stress. In addition, playing sports not only helps children to improve their height and weight but also prevents illness for the elderly.
In conclusion, careers that are related to sports can make the employee rich and famous, however, for those who aren’t keen on doing sports, just take them as a hobby to improve their physical health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67586206897 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36214699091 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1928052227 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214881188872 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765146597957 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348320422792 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12725305297 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245590953324 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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