Learning in a molecular biology laboratory, I have been a postgraduate student for half a year, whereas I majored in Landscape Architecture in the past four years—which was quite distinct from my current major. Finding little pleasure designing gardens and parks, I thought it was the time. Personally, I made that change to find out a relatively favorable profession with which I could earn my living for a period, or for the rest of my life, for I don’t think a decision made four years ago could dominate my entire life. Changes, smaller ones, add joy to otherwise dull, tedious daily works, while major ones enable people to adventure into brand-new areas of human intelligence, I consider that’s why a sector of people prefer changes in lives.
Of course, the significance of repeating, of doing the same things cannot be denied, especially when I came to know more about scientific researches. For instance, before concluding and publishing one’s findings, a series of experiments must be repeated over and over again to ensure the outcomes are convincing and reliable. Repeating and keeping constant is essential for not only scientific works, but also for all human societies.
Thus it’s personal right to choose what kind of lifestyle to live on. However, what matters is not change itself, but what you’ve learned from constant life or changeable ones, and use it to flourish your life. As for me, I would keep changing, from changing my life direction, to changing attitudes towards present assignments when feeling upset or frustrated, to collect skills and experiences before the next leap.
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 84
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- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 84
- Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. What are the advantages and disadvantages. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s, but also for all human societies. Thus it's personal right to choose what...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, as for, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9189360514 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67803030303 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3418695196 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782418865514 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318534133084 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289217962718 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526989632879 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248315171158 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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