Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In recent time, the majority of people love to have fantastic exterior so that they force building contractor to structure the outer look of their house to design with modern style. Here, some expert argued that the government should restrict this at some extend while other opine that builders should have all freedom to structure building as they wanted to do. Before my notion, both sides will be discussed in the ensuing paragraph.
There are many aspects which would be affected heavily if central authorities will not control the outer-shape of skyscrapers. The most common effect is that by constructing new buildings with modern designs, there will be high chances that people will forget their local traditional style of exterior. As a result, after some time natives will not be able to see any odd style building in their cities. Hence, it is good to regulate the fancy design of houses before it becomes a hurdle for the government to stop it, and this is how they can preserve old architecture for the next generation from being vanished totally.
At the same time, it is also too important to have a few modern buildings which can represent the city as a modern city. If in a city, some newly constructed buildings showcase its exterior look with adorable style, the reputation of that city will be high compared to other cities, and that can become a landmark of the city. By allowing merchants to develop buildings as per their desire, not only the local public but also non-native people of the city will attract towards it. Therefore, government should not interfere in the work of contractors and ought to allow people to design buildings with international styles.
To conclude, in my eye, rather than restricting the design of building exterior, government should divert their focus on elsewhere and should set merchants free to develop houses as they required
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...government should restrict this at some extend while other opine that builders should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96529968454 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59052582892 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7384649805 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354410411296 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131614344474 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519125477027 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227344517785 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213075656416 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.