Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
In this era, a vast majority of people relies on the products of the entertainment industry - film, sport or music - to spend its leisure time. Due to this, it has become one of the leading sectors in terms of revenue generated. Some people argue that celebrities in this business are compensated with an undeserved amount of money. I completely agree with this.
There are several reasons why I agree with this argument. The first one is that figures such as movie stars, athletes, serving as the interface of the industry, gain publicity and get a chance to win different extra earning opportunities like endorsing a product in an advertisement, inaugurating some newly opened business, say a fashion or a famous jewellery shop. Whereas, the people having much more significance and whose work involves much more diligence in the industry such as writers, directors, editors, coaches etcetera receive a relatively much smaller share of the industry income. Another reason, once an actor, singer or a sportsperson becomes successful, they become an essential part of the industry, and they get the power to choose his or her charge for performance in a particular event or for specific a production.
On the other hand, there are some other services which require a handsome salary, such as teachers, researchers, doctors, engineers etcetera because they add massive value to the progress of society as a whole. Without these professions, human society would never have been able to accomplish today's sophistication in technology and the convenience brought by this in everyday life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endorsing a product in an advertisement, inaugurating some newly opened business,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21484375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95328744561 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3747035134 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141544227106 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524032741225 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405838656076 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893475142423 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156682539444 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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