Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the way youngsters living in their community. While there are numerous benefits to complying with the long-established traditions, I believe that it is better when young people freely do as they like.
There are several reasons why it might be considered significant to pursue behavior patterns of the ethnic group. Firstly, it contributes to evolving a moral value system for children up to be adults. In the majority of eastern countries, for instance, toddlers are educated to respect and be well-mannered with people who are older than them. Secondly, globalization in recent years has integrated various cultures and increased the gap between generations in society. Therefore, the national cultural identity possibly would be obliterated if teenagers completely overlook their rituals.
In spite of these arguments, I would side with those who assume that youngsters should have a right to independently determine their own lifestyle. Longevous cultures can restrict the capability of young people. For example, women in Asian countries have less chance to learning and working outside, they are required to do household chores and take care of their children instead because of male chauvinism. Furthermore, gaining freedom in modern life opens valuable opportunities for teenagers to exchange and acquire neoteric knowledge such as the latest invention and scientific and technological progress from different countries in the world.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that it is much more comfortable for youngsters to behave as individuals than obey the communal customs of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55731225296 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04184546314 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7033965277 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173038294969 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057582381935 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491115652542 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999803857642 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06370819181 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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