Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that teenagers continue to preserve and promote the traditions inherent in our forefathers, whereas others are of the opinion that they ought to be free to behave as individuals. Personally, while I acknowledge that young people should rightfully have a certain degree of individualism, I still believe that societal traditions should be maintained.
On the one hand, there are some apparent reasons why societal traditions should be followed by the youth. By definition, traditions symbolize the long history and culture of a country or nation and the reflection of the society’s long-standing sets of values and standards. Therefore, the responsibility is on young people to follow these traditions, not only to maintain a sense of continuity from the past, but also to create social unity and cohesion. Additionally, by preserving traditions, teenagers can learn valuable lessons which passed from their forefathers in dao songs, proverbs passed down through thousands of centuries and their authenticity has not changed.
On the other hand, there are others who believe young people have certain rights to behave as free individuals. Not all traditions are worth imitating, there will be some that are outdated, old-fashioned and inapplicable to the thought of today's society. For example, gender imbalance is no longer present nowadays thanks to the increasing awareness of women who have learned to fight for their freedom and rights to eliminate this false tradition. Along with the development of the country, the tendency of individualization among young people is more than in the past when they make their own decisions, express their personal opinions, adopt new things from foreign countries which are towards a unique, less constrained life.
To sum up, the young should respect and follow the traditions of society but to a particular extent not in their entirety, they should keep their individualism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43894389439 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05387368692 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8285072462 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.818181818 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429070803491 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154282220185 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978674622702 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264961907752 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660638101333 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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