: Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that youngsters should live according to the traditions of society. However, I believe that the young generations should follow their own beliefs and be their true selves. In this essay, I will discuss two sides of the argument and provide reasons for my view.
To begin with, these traditions are often formed by the previous generations who have gained a lot of experience throughout history. Consequently, they are true to some extent. For example, we should wear black clothes to funerals to show our respect to the people who passed away. On top of that, if we do not follow society’s traditions, we are up against prejudice. To be specific, the likelihood of us being bullied at schools or mistreated at workplaces is more significant.
However, I support the view that young people should act the ways they would like. Firstly, in my opinion, the best way to lead a happy life is to be our true selves. If we force ourselves to follow the crowd to be socially accepted, we will never achieve fulfillment in our lives. Therefore, we should not be terrified to express who we are to the world. Secondly, creativity enhances as a result of free expression among young people. As when we can behave freely, we are motivated to create more innovative ideas, which contribute significantly to the development of society. For instance, being able to live with her true self as a lesbian, Ellen DeGeneres has created her own talk show through which she has raised funds to support underprivileged but kind-hearted people.
In conclusion, although not following the traditions can result in great pressure from the public, I would argue that it is crucial to live according to our intuitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90689655172 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86221229388 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5544916588 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26506993807 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835844916133 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744309249621 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151294123059 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075410075425 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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