Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views on whether local news or international news should be paid more attention. While it can be argued that international news should be preferred, I am of the opinion that domestic news should be prioritized.
On one hand, through international news, citizens will be given the perspective of other different cultures and ways of life and utilize it in our life. For instance, an international news about an English festival may help a student who is studying English history at school understand more about the subject. Moreover, global news will keep residents updated about the world's current situation. Therefore, they can stay connected with the other parts of the world.
On the other hand, local news should be prioritized as it is more relevant to residents' life. In other words, it focuses on more localized issues and events. Some of its main information are the weather forecast and local politics of the area. For example, during the pandemic, news would update the number of cases in its specific area, which should be more concerned, rather than the global number of cases. Therefore, through national media, people will be more aware of problems that are directly related to their daily life.
In conclusion, while international news can help to some extent, I believe that national news is more worth-reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'international news'.
Suggestion: international news
...d utilize it in our life. For instance, an international news about an English festival may help a st...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at national news is more worth-reading.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15837104072 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77920894771 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8509893306 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389316145278 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149847826118 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894869325823 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255788779035 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699375417182 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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