Some people hold that parents should spend more time with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
How much time should parents company with their children has been a debatable issue. Some people argue that parents should stay with their kids for a long time. While others believe that parents should give children’s space independently enough. Personally, both sides of the issues should be taken into consideration.
Everybody needs own time especially children. To begin with, a large quantity of researches shows that kids can concentrate on something in which they are interested when there is no others company. If auldts were played with them all the time, they would distory their attention. This will become a big problem when they enter in the school. Some students as we known have serious issues that they find it is difficult to focus on study during class. Some psychology experiments incovers the reason as I mentioned ealier. Moreover, parents spend less time with their children can cultivate their problem-solving skills. Every child prefers to depend on their parents. So they should give them enough chances to thinking, analying and solving problems independently. Thinking methods instead of asking for parents’ help when they face to difficulties. Last but not least, parents also need much more own spaces and time to study, work and housework.
However, the opposite side of this issue should be taken into consideration. Staying with children more time can let them feel be loved sufficently. Each child needs the love and care from their mother and father. Perhaps companying with them is a better way to show this. Besides, through spending time together with children, parents will be able to monitor their children’s academic performance.
On the basis of the above discussion, parents spend less time with their kids which can cultivate children many skills and better characteristic which can benefit their whole life. Personally, I tend to agree this side of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
How much time should parents company with their children has been a ...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no others'?
Suggestion: there are no others
...thing in which they are interested when there is no others company. If auldts were played with the...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ch they are interested when there is no others company. If auldts were played with the...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...nter in the school. Some students as we known have serious issues that they find it i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253561253561 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797720797721 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045584045584 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0683760683761 0.0437548338989 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105413105413 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.031339031339 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77513330485 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0683760683761 0.0861772015684 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.039886039886 0.021408717616 186% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.019943019943 0.011925033212 167% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1917.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26470588235 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352941176471 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261437908497 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173202614379 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114379084967 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77513330485 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.9200149242 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.9090909091 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6544961024 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1363636364 127.492653851 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.814263465372 50% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 40.0528817588 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.45744680851 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351699217307 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0636721428825 0.102741220458 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581371834953 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.404339121062 0.534860350844 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144113072721 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115114394317 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814235648404 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293734450758 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00873294399135 0.0638462369009 14% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242757441059 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579561719862 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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