Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
While some consumers prefer to purchase local products, others prefer imported goods. In this essay, I will discuss these buying habits of people and I will explain why I believe buying locally produced goods are better for the economy.
To begin with, some people choose to purchase imported goods due to the quality of the products. With the advancement in technology, many renowned companies use modern machines which eventually enhance quality. Such flawless goods attract buyers globally. For instance, a famous clothing brand Zara has comfortable designs that last longer. Furthermore, in some places imported products are considered a status symbol, so people buy these items for their image. In Turkey, being able to buy a Ferrari shows that a person is wealthy.
On the other hand, some people prefer buying from local markets and stores since they want to support the local economy. If people buy locally manufactured products their money would go to local businesses rather than big international corporations. Also, a small local business creates employment opportunities and contributes to national income. Hence, the local economy will benefit from this act. For instance, in Turkey, we had a campaign which, encouraged people to purchase local products. Moreover, local goods are cheaper than international ones. Since expenditures ranging from custom duty and transportation to distribution are not incurring to produce it, customers save a lot of money. For example, locally grown apples in the stores are 1$ whereas, apples which imported from Holland cost 3$.
Inconclusion, people buy imported good for quality and the prestigious of the item however, others choose native goods to support the local economy. In my opinion, buying local products are better for the countries future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they want to support the local economy. If people buy locally manufactured product...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
... locally grown apples in the stores are 1$ whereas, apples which imported from Hol...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...apples which imported from Holland cost 3$. Inconclusion, people buy imported goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40425531915 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73059776914 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3723161756 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327967301783 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102096652236 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098850846339 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216937411579 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688213660211 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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