Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have diverged between eat at food stands or restaurants and prepare and eat food at home. This essay agrees with prepare and eat food at home. This essay will discuss the benefits of prepare and eat food at home on health and lifestyle.
Prepare and eat food at home do have numerous benefits on your health. First of all, you will be sure that you are eating healthy food, prepared by a commodity kind of oil. For example, as it is known, healthy food always leads to strengthens bones, supports muscles, and keeps skin, teeth and eyes healthy. Eating healthy food may help you live longer and lower risk of heart disease. Having a healthy mind, a sound mind in a sound body, head directly to a productive life.
Prepare and eat food at home is an easy way to change your lifestyle for the better. It always lead to a productive life. for example, save money, when you eat at a food stands or restaurants, you do not pay only for food, but you also pay the costs of running that business, costs like lights, water, building and staff in addition to the meal, that's why prepare and eat at home is always cheaper than eat in food stands and restaurants.
In conclusion, people have to prepare their food and eat at home, because it's the only way to make sure that they are eating healthy food, what leads to a better health and lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... food at home on health and lifestyle. Prepare and eat food at home do have...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'strengthen'.
Suggestion: strengthen
... is known, healthy food always leads to strengthens bones, supports muscles, and keeps skin...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, head directly to a productive life. Prepare and eat food at home is an e...
^^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...our lifestyle for the better. It always lead to a productive life. for example, save...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r. It always lead to a productive life. for example, save money, when you eat at a ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...or example, save money, when you eat at a food stands or restaurants, you do not pay o...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ding and staff in addition to the meal, thats why prepare and eat at home is always c...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an eat in food stands and restaurants. In conclusion, people have to prepar...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...are their food and eat at home, because its the only way to make sure that they are...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48178137652 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25378473702 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493927125506 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6401113592 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433836708507 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204614890012 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134489198027 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312259118759 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705748226921 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... food at home on health and lifestyle. Prepare and eat food at home do have...
^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'strengthen'.
Suggestion: strengthen
... is known, healthy food always leads to strengthens bones, supports muscles, and keeps skin...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, head directly to a productive life. Prepare and eat food at home is an e...
^^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...our lifestyle for the better. It always lead to a productive life. for example, save...
^^^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r. It always lead to a productive life. for example, save money, when you eat at a ...
^^^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...or example, save money, when you eat at a food stands or restaurants, you do not pay o...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ding and staff in addition to the meal, thats why prepare and eat at home is always c...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an eat in food stands and restaurants. In conclusion, people have to prepar...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...are their food and eat at home, because its the only way to make sure that they are...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48178137652 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25378473702 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493927125506 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6401113592 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433836708507 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204614890012 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134489198027 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312259118759 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705748226921 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.