Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are some persons who adore eating out, and others who would rather eating healthy food. Therefore, they prepare their food at home. Having meals out or at restaurants is very enjoyable, but it is not healthy. In spite of eating at home is healthier than eating out, but it may not be delicious as eating at eateries. This essay will discuss two types of people: first type is who love eating out, the other type is the ones who care about eating at home.
There is a huge number of people who pay money for ingesting their meals outside. They may spend money at lots of restaurants only to reload with their meals because food at restaurants has significant taste. There is another goal of eating out or eating at food stands which is providing time and effort for people who work or can’t make their meals. Take it for an example, there are some employees everyday feed themselves at food stands because of their nature of jobs, also because they have not enough time to prepare food, so they have to bring fast food.
In the opposite side, there are people take care of their life, and they do not eat unhealthy food, so they care about making meals ta their own kitchen. They consider that paying for food at restaurants is wasting money. Healthy food is chosen by people who go on healthy lifestyle, or those who are patients. Doctors advise the public to eat healthy food and keep on healthy lifestyle. Healers say that restaurants’ foods and street foods have enormous rate of cholesterol which means that there will be serious health problems in the future for people who eat a lot of junk food.
To conclude, there are various types of people; firstly, who are keen on eating out. Secondly, those who are looking after their medical issues. In my opinion, eating homemade food is very significant for anyone who wants to have a good health. When you have a good health, you will have a perfect mental health. I think people who eat out have the benefit of the taste of food, but they may have a bad health. While, people who eat inside their home, healthy people, have a valid health, but they may not have tasty food. In the end, I would like to say that everything has a tax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54020100503 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2177106892 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464824120603 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0244353922 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0476190476 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323146478818 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125288391203 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712328693871 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23720438319 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059719231759 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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