Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and so it is often argued
that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that former prisoners are the best people to provide advice to teenagers about the dangers of committing something illegal.
prisoners may still be grappling with the trauma and challenges of their
Despite former prisoners becoming good manners, I believe that Some former prison, which could make it difficult for them to effectively counsel
teenagers. This essay will provide evidence to support this point of view.
Former prisoners who have successfully rehabilitated and reintegrated into society can speak from personal, first-hand experience about the harsh realities of prison. This credibility can make their warnings and advice more impactful for at-risk youth. These individuals have a deeper
understanding of the social pressures,temptations, and thought
processes that can lead young people to commit crimes. This insider perspective allows them to provide more accurate and relatable guidance. - Seeing someone who has turned their life around serves as a positive role model. Former prisoners may be able to build stronger connections and rapport with troubled teenagers, who may be more
receptive to mentorship from someone who has "been there" rather than
an authority figure.
There is a risk that some former prisoners may not have truly reformed or may still harbour negative influences or behaviours that could be counterproductive when speaking to impressionable youth. - Individuals without a criminal history may be better equipped to provide a more objective, well-rounded perspective on the dangers of crime and the importance of making good choices. Other professionals, such as social workers, counsellors, or law enforcement officers, may be better positioned to provide comprehensive education and guidance on crime prevention.
In conclusion, the idea that former prisoners may advise children to prevent them from committing crimes could be difficult to apply in our society. in my opinion, social workers, and counselors are the best people to provide advice
- The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009 67
- Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life Discuss both these views and give your own opi 67
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison What do you think are the causes of this What effects will this have on society 89
- You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late Write a letter to your landlord In your letter explain Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When willful pay the rent 73
- Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high tech media such as software videos or Dvds Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75165562914 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17161049635 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6240218026 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.071428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204792199571 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762453672557 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762798495739 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815052697462 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833529586887 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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