Some people prefer to focus on their jobs and have little interest about their hobbies. Others enjoy doing their hobbies and are more intersted in it than their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree and give your opinion.
A portion of people thinks that the most important thing in life is their work and they are not intersted in other activities. To the contrary, others feel more engaged about their hobbies and leisure interests than activities that involves their jobs. These 2 contradicting views will be discussed in further details.
People that are more intersted in their jobs than their hobbies are usually very hard worker. They would spend their holidays and would not mind to work overtime so that they can finish their jobs as perfect as they can. These people are very passionate about their jobs so that they can reap the results for example, a promotion from their superiors.
Others that are more passionate about their hobbies are usually more laid back. They would rather do something that they are happy about even if their interests has no benefits other than making them feel satisfied. Some of them would even go as far as taking a day off from their duties just to have a pleasant time with their family and friends.
In my opinion, I believe that none of these views are wrong as long as they balance their work and their leisure times. People are allowed to work as hard as possible, but they should take a break once in a while so that they do not feel too exhausted. On other hand, people are not prohibited to enjoy life by doing their hobbies as long as they do not neglect their duties and know the boundaries. In conclusion, people are allowed to work hard, but they should not forget to take a break and have fun.
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- Many people believe that inherent talent is more important than practice in many fields like sport or music. According to them great musicians and sportsmen are born and can’t be created. However, others claim that talent has little to do with success a 56
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- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60583941606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23398212054 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470802919708 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.988806126 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472193059157 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212157616776 0.084324248473 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113826509913 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329179151781 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183275933189 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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