Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.

Weather is first and foremost factor which is considered by the people while planning to migrate to any place. It all depends upon the personal preference of the individuals as some people love to accomodate in the cold weather while others including me love the hot weather because of less fog in the environment and more freedom to wear fashionable clothes.

People with their views in favor of cold climate validate their point by saying winters are beneficial because there is vast variety of fruits and vegetables in this season. Apart from that, winter season is much more relaxing than the summer, as warmth of quilt give heavenly bliss. They prefer cold because low degree temprature can be curbed by wearing warm clothes without spending too much money on electrical equipments like air conditioners to cut heat in scorching summers.

On the other side summers has its on merits. In hot areas environment is clear and roads are visible therefore chances of road accidents are less as compared to winters. Moreover, hot weather provides healthy and active lifestyle. People in hot regions work more hours as days are longer compared to cold regions because sunset late there. Hot environment is also preference of those who want to flaunt their fit body. Apparels for summers are cheaper and fashionable as well, people can show off them unlike winters where they have to wear heavy layers of clothes in order to keep them warm.

In conclusion, it can be said that every individual has his own choice and view point to support their side but still in my perception hot weather is much more safe for the healthy lifestyle and also on the top hot weather allows to be trendy and up to date in terms of fashion.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...fore chances of road accidents are less as compared to winters. Moreover, hot weat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45432155644 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9378692523 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196756847357 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671866315411 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488856931525 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116693070651 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423030787036 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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