Compared to past when youngsters get married before their twenties, nowadays couples are pushing their marriage dates and they bring their children into the world in their thirties. Definitely, this is positive development because it not only gives enough time to the adults to establish their carrier but also for making them mature enough for their children upbringing.
Most of the youngsters prefer to live luxurious life and in order to fulfill their desires they choose to make themselves more independent by aquiring higher education degrees to get reputative jobs with handsome salary, which in turn is a positive thinking and to follow their dreams they consider developing family in their twenties like burden because the time has changed now as inflation has hit hard every sector. With this it is quite difficult to run family expenses. This is also a major reason why youngsters prefer to delay their marriages.
Apart from that mutual understanding is also a point in their consideration as it is opined by them, with more age person get mature and it will certainly strengthen their ability to raise their children in proper manner. As lack of understanding is most common reason of divorce, keeping this in mind couples tends to be in equal relation and spend more time together than going for marriage at once that in turn is a positive practice not only for their married life but also for the future of their kids.
To conclude, i must say that the idea of having a married life in thirties is a positive trend by considering socioeconomic condition of the society,with this they become strong pillars of their future family by making sufficient savings to fulfill the demands of their family.
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
- Nowadays we can see definite signs of surplus production in almost every industry sector, and this is leading to environmental damage. What are some possible solutions to this situation? 73
- Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development? 61
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62757970658 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.333301863 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.375 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284183394965 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129763362963 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049428281631 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186053313954 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234835068253 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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