Environmental damage is the major concern of society nowadays. Most of the pollution is raised by the industrial waste and the harmful pollutants by factories in the air. Its all bearable to some extent where there is no alternative but in current scenario most of the industries doing it knowingly by air producing their products more than its demand in market. Surplus production of goods is just to lower down the manufacturing cost which ends up wastage of bulk commodities and natural resources which they use as raw material in manufacturing process. There are same measures to curb the detrimental effects of this trend.
The government can play effective role to keep this control. Government should deploy separate bodies to tackle this issue. They should examine industries frequently and keep track of their production. Heavy penalties should be imposed on production units who validate laws. Apart from that, government should subsidies installations of new machinaries which runs on renewable sources such as solar panel, hydro energy which will not only helps in lower down environmental issues but also saves money on the production.
Industries should also be part of this important concern of society by switching to biodegradable product as raw material by avoiding plastic, rubber, production units should follow the maximum production limits set by the government bodies. Surrounding of industrial area should be covered with greenery by planting trees to seize the noxious effect of harmful gasses produced by factories.
To conclude, it is clear that surplus manufacturing it harming environment undoubtedly but still it can be controlled by the collective effort of both industries and government bodies by limiting the production of goods and choosing renewable raw material and less pollutive ways on production.
- Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development? 61
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
- Nowadays we can see definite signs of surplus production in almost every industry sector, and this is leading to environmental damage. What are some possible solutions to this situation? 73
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43554006969 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97053398618 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0834623799 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161782472657 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608728487021 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339294455136 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101040424092 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117780227527 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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