Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
The improvement of infrastructure in recent years has significantly boosted the tourism business. Traveling has now considered as a common pastime among people in both developing and developed countries. As a result, several claim that tourist industry has a detrimental influence on numerous features of regional attractiveness. One excellent example of this is ethnic uniqueness and the majesty of distant landscapes, whereas others make the argument that tourism has a substantial advantage in terms of creating employment opportunity for locals. The benefits and drawbacks of tourism will be thoroughly discussed.
To commence, the major benefit of tourist businesses is the strengthening of the economy. The large number of visitors enhances a country's gross domestic product since the revenue from travelers sustains all services and even develops additional enterprises such as hotels. Likewise, the transformation has an immediate impact on locals in tourism destinations. The tourism sector subsequently offers numerous work possibilities for native people, specifically in tourist services like as guides and cab drivers. Furthermore, the government may enhance tourism earnings and utilize this funding to promote education, health care, and public transportation systems.
Nevertheless, when a tourism destination attracts a large number of tourists, it might have a deleterious influence. Overcrowding causes people to irresponsibly discard waste and ruin beautiful locations, exacerbating the environmental catastrophe. Evidence for this appears in numerous historical places that have been purposefully destroyed by travelers, who scatter garbage around or scrawl graffiti on the walls. Additionally, since indigenous populations would gain knowledge and adapt to different societies instead of maintaining segregated and performing their traditional customs, global tourism will affect local people living secluded and practice their own traditions.
In conclusion, the benefits of tourist businesses continue to exceed the disadvantages. Nonetheless, I would like to point out that the government still needs to control the number of visitors in order to keep them at a manageable level, as well as provide adequate financing for preserving a nation's cultural character and conserving the environment around tourist destinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'several claims'.
Suggestion: several claims
...g and developed countries. As a result, several claim that tourist industry has a detrimental...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ss, when a tourism destination attracts a large number of tourists, it might have a deleterious i...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ovide adequate financing for preserving a nations cultural character and conserving the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06306306306 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33355516942 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651651651652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2406119515 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1875 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175352470161 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528866525529 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047433835656 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949255796843 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418539363943 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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