Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In fact, numerous people opine that maintaining a stable life with unchanged habits is their preference meanwhile some consider change in life is definitely not only crucial but also enjoyable. Although each lifestyle has both obvious advantages and disadvantages, I incline to opt for a more animated life with plenty of changes.
On the one hand, some people prefer to maintain stablised habits or routine for a long time and also restrict themselves to alter because they are afraid of the consequences which may be worse than the present condition. The prolonged job, or habit has been satisfying, guaranteeing their feelings. To take office workers as an example, most of them choose this career due to its stability and assurance with monthly salary, same daily schedule five or six days a week. No matter how the world would vary, office workers can assure themselves of their unchanged benefits. Besides, there are some individuals think that association with disorganised life seems similar to play gamble, putting themselves at risk because they are not able to predict exactly what will happen next. However beneficial it may be, uncertain results already outweighs the good outcome.
On the other hand, in term of apparent benefits, many individuals enjoy changes most of the time. Evidently, our society has experiences a variety of transformation called the evolution for thousands years from human beings in prehistoric era who could only hunting or scavenging wild animals with simple stone tools to modern humans who have devised many useful up-to-date items supporting their lives. Some changes may be detrimental, but after that movement, each of us can learn from mistake and accomplish success or better lifestyle. Moreover, when our lives are devoid of movements or changes, it must be mundane. The world includes different amusing activities that we should participate in; so that we can both be engaged in pleasure and glean necessary knowledge.
To conclude, a person can fancy either a life of stability or a haphazard way of living based on their perception or preference. Nonetheless, I believe that it is indispensable to make every day different for good
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...dition. The prolonged job, or habit has been satisfying, guaranteeing their feelings. To take o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22159090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83849329103 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7395321061 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.533333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146338707029 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467067424076 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304311096657 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842178264214 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162376434783 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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