Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing whether people should or should not experience the similar activities during their whole life and avoid change as much as possible. Although both of this lifestyle can bring pros and cons, there are still many debatable opinions around this topic. Both sides of this statement will be analysed in this essay before my rational conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, the reason why some people have a tendency for doing similar daily routine instead of changing it based on many elements such as characteristics, their own thinking,.... Firstly, people enjoy executing the similar things because they feel confident and comfortable when they acting this way. For instance, people can see themselves as the best version when they doing similar activities instead of changing them. Secondly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this meaningful beauty because of their ancient establishment. Every little change in these facets can make the next generation undermine these meaning. Thirdly, the alternatives costs us a bunch of time to make people get used to it and some individuals assume that the change is quite time-consuming.
On the other hands, it is evident that change is always a good way in order to lead us to the novel era. To be clear, thanks to the change, we can see many creative and prolific things in terms of technology, mindset,... Taking for an instance, the change from mobile phone to smart phone have contributed a tremendous meaning in the modernized world. People don't need to take a huge time to go shopping, make a reservation,... because everything now can complete with a touch. Moreover, the change in mindset help us easy to intergrate with foreigner friends across the globe, which plays a vital role in this globalised age. Shifting to the new things can widen our horizon and get out of the comfort zone. Sometimes, the change can bring a range of useful meanings to our daily life.
To recapitulate, it is obvious that shifting not always the good things in any facets. In my opinion, I opt for the statement which biased on the change because without change, we hardly see many tremendous success in technology, economy like today.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as characteristics, their own thinking,.... Firstly, people enjoy executing the ...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
.... Secondly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this mea...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Residents
...econdly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this meaningful be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...c things in terms of technology, mindset,... Taking for an instance, the change fr...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...meaning in the modernized world. People dont need to take a huge time to go shopping...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... time to go shopping, make a reservation,... because everything now can complete w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00533333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74407644856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7659644534 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266580139404 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719596263342 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485572621509 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152794136877 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332297213867 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as characteristics, their own thinking,.... Firstly, people enjoy executing the ...
^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...m. Secondly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this me...
^^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
.... Secondly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this mea...
^^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Residents
...econdly, in terms of culture, custom,.. residents would like to uphold this meaningful be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...c things in terms of technology, mindset,... Taking for an instance, the change fr...
^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...meaning in the modernized world. People dont need to take a huge time to go shopping...
^^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... time to go shopping, make a reservation,... because everything now can complete w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00533333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74407644856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7659644534 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266580139404 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719596263342 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485572621509 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152794136877 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332297213867 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.