Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, a part of the public is likely to repeat their surroundings and not to easily change themselves. However, it is also stated that changes always positively influence them. In this essay, I will scrutinize both views before giving my final opinion.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people tend to be repetitive. The primary rationale is the anxiety of facing challenges when taking up new things. Being used to a number of aspects makes people hardly find new experiences because these people are scared of failure and they do not confide in themselves. For instance, a businessman has run a company selling offline for several years and the earnings are sustainably high. Therefore, making a shift to selling products online seems to be difficult with him due to the possibility of dropping volumes. Apparently, the trend of being stable on decisions absolutely lessens citizens’ opportunities and developments.
On the other hand, it is asserted that change always has a beneficial impact on individuals based on some evidence. First of all, changes clearly create new challenges, resulting in much more experiences. Thanks to new experiences, individuals could intensively expand their knowledge in more and more fields. For example, the majority of Eastern countries avoided sex education taught at school since they thought it still has an array of barriers, especially traditional belief. Nevertheless, they have recently been open-minded to this. Since then, their children have a better sex-related education, which remarkably mitigates a wide range of problems caused by the shortage of sex awareness. There is no doubt that changes play an important role in modern society.
Nonetheless, It should be taken into account that change is not always foremost and repetition is considerably good to some extent. For instance, some customs such as worshiping or maintaining a traditional lifestyle are highly praised. In terms of changes, differences in how people behave when they get richer and richer is a negative shift.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the harmony of changes and repetition on some aspects would be idealistic for individuals to lead their lives because shifts are not always positively
beneficial and stability is crucial in some cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...lead their lives because shifts are not always positively beneficial and stability ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beneficial
...use shifts are not always positively beneficial and stability is crucial in some cases....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35342465753 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95651095509 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608219178082 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7419453308 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215134451852 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572398470197 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462862943934 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106890957651 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494402307223 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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