Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing?
Suggest some solutions.
As the rapid development takes place in various cities, youngsters encounter an array of issues. In this essay, I will scrutinize these problems before giving practical solutions.
There is no doubt that divergent problems that young people face are apparently traced to the development of big cities. Primarily, the younger people have to cope with financial pressure when living in metropolises. It could not be denied that the living cost in major cities is absolutely high, which forces people to fully devote themselves to their occupations so as to make a decent living. For instance, a part of the young generation spends almost 12 hour a day on deadlines or extra jobs to maximize their income as much as possible. This brings about the lack of time for their health recovery. Consequently, their health is seriously deteriorated day by day, which leads to the less productive they are in the near future career. On a family scale, a problem the financial pressure gives rise to is the shortage of time spent on family members, which poses a threat to a less connective family bond.
However, the issues caused by metropolis’s fast growth could be tackled by numerous measures. First of all, it is suggested that youngsters consider moving to the suburbs in order to cut down on expensive costs such as accommodation, cuisine… This means that they do not need to work as much as they are in big cities. As a result, they have much more time for healthcare, sports and especially family, which is their work promotion. Another solution is that young individuals should re-examine their spending habits. Disbursement on expensive products like fashion or cuisine should be mitigated to ensure that they are able to afford basic needs and save an amount of money for their children’s education in the future.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the typical challenge young people face when living in metropolises is financial difficulties. Nevertheless, this could practically be solved by changing habit spending and residing in suburbs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, as to, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09763313609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85856542861 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4332872875 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208155751421 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615810829574 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537826970651 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104432060048 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059068783087 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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