Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In the globalization process, many people from all over the world dispute whether the advertising substantially achieves the goal of appealing viewers to purchase their product. However, there is another point of view given that advertising is not an effortless method to draw upon the residents nowadays. Although the advertisement industry may cause some constant debates, I believe that advertising has a striking impact on convincing people to buy their products.
There is a significant rationale to acknowledge that advertising has played a vital role with an aim to grab people’s attention. The most justifiable reason is that advertising is becoming the compelling element for buyers who have a desire to explore the product’s brand and its quality. This is mainly due to the fact that a myriad of customers want to make sure all the things they tend to purchase meet their requirements. Therefore, product’s advertisement will help the buyer purchase their product they need without unnecessary procedure.
On the other hand, there is a legitimate exposition to perceive that advertisement in recently becomes incompetent method to appeal buyers. The most considerable explanation is that many advertisement companies are abusing the influence of advertising which is leading to the disturbance for people watching it. This can be perfectly exemplified that there are 70% of citizens complaining about the distraction of advertisement, according to a 2020 survey. Hence, a majority of people assert that they will never watch and claim to detest all types of advertisement.
In conclusion, while there are many benefits of advertisements regarding the negative perspective on them, I still believe that it is more beneficial to watch advertisements because It is advisable that people acknowledge the essential contribution of advertisement and to learn how to utilize the advantage of it effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54915254237 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32311293441 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0531939733 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224310084076 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834976636807 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536175627277 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142955508717 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355619950716 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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