Whether the advertising is a huge success to let people purchase commodities, or merely a dreary method for marketing since few people would be attracted by it, is a popular topic for some people. When we are discussing the significance of advertising to the business, I recognize the advertising is just one of the approaches for companies to make money, but the companies shoud not only focus on the advertising. I will discuss the topic as follows.
On one hand, some advertisement gained great success. Like the slogan " Just do it". Almost every one in the wolrd knows this ad form Nike. It is so impressive that it becomes not only one of the most successfull ads in the world, but also a kind of culture to encourage people to struggle with the tough life. Young people in most of coutries in the world are proud of wearing nike shoes as well as apparels. This advertisment brings billions dollars net profits to Nike company and Nike is hitherto insisiting on this advertisment's culture and developing more and more successful products.
A big win for the advertisments. On the other hand, this does not always happen today. As for some brands, there is no need for them to think hard on the advertisment. Like the restaurants, we can hardly see the ads of them. However, the reviews on Yelp or other websites will tell you which restaurant serve better cusines. In most of the business, the companies should concerntrate on the products or servives themselves instead of all on advertsiing, the value of consumers' reviews cost much.
At last, It seems to be the dawn of the advertising. As my concern, advertsing is not extremely successful at making people to consume. Moreover, there are few companies like Nike made great succsess on the advertisement. Consumers are becoming more and more smart due to the declining economy as well as the development of internent, the advertisments' affect less on them than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88519637462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92837309312 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5013442898 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221407087582 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600366326159 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562129613322 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129083374659 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445841006575 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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