There is no denying the fact that education has more worthwhile in students life in existing time. Although, few individuals consider that some subject viz, music drama and creative writing are more crucial for children. So, they ought to include it in the timetable. I agree with this notion and I will explain my viewpoint in the related to the upcoming paragraphs.
To being with, it is clear that entertainment subject is more drawback for education into student life. While it is fact that student is neglect for education and their more prefer to joy activity. Owing to it is more impact on studies.
Commencing with the most salient benefit in joyful various subject life music drama, art if involved in the plan. However, it is noticed that it is more worthwhile, the more education. Since they are change of professionals life style today time. Moreover, the government should be embarked every school and cites. Owing to children not only does change their lifestyle, but also they are more become healthier in life. Nowadays they are an introspective person as well as they have more burden due to they are not proper attention on studies. Therefore, they should be few time other activities at the time involved in the timetable.
Furthermore, the ample number of perspective viewpoint why art, writing, drama and creative writing subject more significant for student life. Although, the trend of include recreation subject in the plan list. In fact of reducing stress, due to do enough healing interest in education. For instance, nowadays majority of student do not time more time spent on studies since they feel exhausted, so it is a bad impact on studies. Therefore, parents and teacher should be a few time to give recreation activity. Ergo, it is observed if involve these subject in student timetable, whereas, it is tremendously more important for teenagers life than past.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that art subjects possess and adverse effect on the young owing to their impractical nature and high initial requirements in terms of talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7328625595 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521865889213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0316645936 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166760288364 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546182456709 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050943464949 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101151141422 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500001557979 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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