Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Public health is a major concern at present times. Sports is of course a beneficial way to improve peoples’ health, which mainly concerns physical activities. But it is only one factor of being healthy. There are others like balanced diet, daily routines, habits etc which have to be kept in mind. That’s why only increasing the number of sports facilities is not sufficient to improve health.
To become healthy, some sort of physical activities are required for everyone, based on their situations and physical conditions. Sports is a really good way to fulfill that requirement. This is where sports facilities come in. Sports facilities encourage people to get involved in physical activities, which is both enjoyable and beneficial. This is the reason for which the number of sports facilities should be increased.
While sports facilities will help people to be healthy, however, sports alone cannot help to reach to their goal. Since good health also depends on diet and routines. People with poor diet plan are never going to be completely healthy, no matter how much exercise they perform. It is crucial what they are absorbing inside their body. So, it is necessary to inform people about the importance of introducing balanced and healthy foods in their diet. To accomplish this, doctors should play the most important role here.
Daily routine may seem to be an insignificant matter, but it has a lot to do with health. A person who does not have a well planned routine cannot improve his/her health by just taking healthy food and exercising. For example, sleep is an important thing in order to be healthy. Every person should have a least amount of sleep to be able to perform their activities. Otherwise public health will not be improved the way it is expected.
So to conclude, while increasing sports facilities can help improve public health to a certain extent, it is not attainable without taking other necessary measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, for example, of course, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0866873065 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69414959568 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9419670058 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6818181818 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269451694319 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822601414113 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708107909695 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166600854255 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668895758783 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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