Leading a health life is important for all age groups. Having a healthy society is important for the country and economy. Government has taken lots of measures to ensure public fitness. Let us discuss the if opening more sports facilities will improve public health or not.
Importance should be given to maintain good health. Staying fit will benefit not only the family but also society. Health care has become expensive and not everyone can afford good medical care. If one is not healthy, expenditure on buying medicine and medical treatment will become more. In order to avoid such unnecessarily expenses staying fit becomes important. There are many ways to stay fit, walk regularly in parks, go to gym or play sports.It is established that playing sports will help one stay mentally and physically fit. Lots of efforts are taken by government as well to encourage people engage in sports. For example: We have famous sports personality taking stay fit challenge along with the Prime Minister of the nation to encourage and spread awareness among public about staying fit and healthy.
Currently there are very few sports facilities in societies and are expensive, not all can afford it. In order to make public involve in sports we have to open more sports facilities which are affordable or free of cost. Sports facilities should include games such as squash which is a good cardio exercise, jogging tracks, badminton, swimming etc,. to stay fit.
Therefore, in my opinion opening more sport facilities definitely improve the public health. People should also use the sports facilities regularly in order gain more benefits. Government can provide the facility but at the end it is the public who have to use it and build general awareness of staying fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07191780822 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54192422714 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1659704017 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189936821583 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665350739333 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633636365643 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146208511474 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056410781231 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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