Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
It is true that many people believe in improving public health, increasing sport facilitates have been vital, while some individuals recline in other ways. I believe both of verdicts should be considered for having a healthy society
On the one hand, to be accessed of facilities for a variety of sports can motivate the majority of people who make an excuse to do not exercise. Some individuals after choosing their sport may be ceased and abandon them due to they faced to lack of facilities in places such as parks or gyms.to be provided those kinds of equipment can help to have the health of people as consequence the health of society and we will see the dynamic population.As well as most of the healthy mental and the health physical rise dramatically, totally we can see the noticeable improvement of people who were involved in those programs.
On the other hand, some people believe other measures such as a balanced diet, having pure air, controlling blood pressure and glucose for the target public health cannot be denied. They say for having healthy people all members of society should be having regular programs for diets and controlling blood presser and glucose. An example the USA a country which is very successful in programs, the government of USA by regular programs in changing diet and controlling of criteria health can have unbelievable achievements, they also could be prospered to controlling obesity in the USA. Another important factor which has had the basic role in public health is accessing to clear water and air, also avoiding breathing in air pollution for protection of bacterial diseases and respiratory diseases, Hence for having best conditions for the public health all of the measures should be considered.
In conclusion, as far as I am cornered, I would say boosting the public facilities in sports majors and awareness of the criteria of healthy life will be to promote public health in each society, therefore, those are inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77270077815 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.894944817 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.875 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304044351638 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156149399905 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826543013871 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201944904445 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388348363019 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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