Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas
In the third worlds, factors such as health, education, and trade have been big issues. Some people believe richest and developed countries should have some planes to aid poverty countries and can do their obligation. I completely agree with this idea.
In the one hand, the developed nations can investment and give kind of loans to undeveloped ones. Africa, for example, has had a poor country and poor people, yet they have had unique natural sources. Rich countries by investment and give loans in this resources can kill to birds with one stone. The investment for basic needs and provide the golden opportunities for this country to use profits of resources. Hence they can have good achievements and investments in their sub bases such as health system, education system. Therefore they can tackle many important problems also they can have good promotion in hospitals also work to prevent some dangerous and aggressive disease like IHV.
on The other hand, some drawbacks of those donations cannot be denied.in some poverty countries due to the lack of clear management and existence of corporation in local systems, aides and amounts of money cannot distribute between organs fairly. As well as, the money abuse by some delinquent people. For instance in Tanzania, unclear management has caused many donations and money from foreign investments lost and have given radicals and terrorism gropes like Bokoharam. Hence these situations have high risks for developed countries and their investments
All in all, as far as am I concerned, I believe the help of rich countries are so effective and have positive effects in the promotion of poor natives but I believe should be clear systems and authorities System for preventing corruptions in those countries.
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- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 56
- Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas 78
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...uch as health system, education system. Therefore they can tackle many important problems...
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Suggestion: On
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20979020979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69978074647 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0193763517 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122245003304 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460924274493 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415744887308 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746422907568 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175550315831 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.