Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world
It is true several languages are in danger of extinction and may disappear in the near future. Some individuals believe that is not the big issue and will be helped to a comfortable life, I believe all of the languages should be protected and preserved.
There are many reasons why all languages should be alieved. Firstly every language from wherever of the world has rich constants which are show culture and identities of every people. Secondly, each language has had backgrounds that help nations to know about ancestors and could be the clear reason for exploration of the existence of their forefather and their life. Finally, this is right of every nation to have their language, preserve and expand them due to they want to keep their connection between past and future for best examples are museums in every countries are best evidence ,hence nations ask their governments to have restricted program for avoiding of extinction languages.
On the others hand, some groups of people believe that omitting many languages can help human to have easier life .they say that is not a sophisticating stage for people, if the number of languages decreases, we will have an easy life, easy communication between nations and help relationships people's nation. They have another reason that preserving each language will have had many costs and any countries cannot cope those cost, and this huge budget can be spent better place such as public service or health care system. Despite those reasons, I think protecting of all languages is worth able.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned I would say if the limitation of the number of languages help us to have the easy life and better connection but every language is a book of history that should be preserved for each nation therefore that is inevitable .
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 56
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 56
- Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas 78
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world 61
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
...helped to a comfortable life, I believe all of the languages should be protected and prese...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: .
...uages can help human to have easier life .they say that is not a sophisticating st...
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Suggestion: .
...each nation therefore that is inevitable .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94426229508 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66363726427 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4876234631 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310860696088 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137735210972 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468744685868 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203065937484 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376346799727 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.