Some people say that the fashion industry has negative impacts on our lives. Do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable fact that fashion plays a crucial role in the life of human beings. While there are certain drawbacks of the fashion industry, I would argue that it is more beneficial for our society. In the following paragraphs, my opinions will be supported by advantages and examples of fashion.
It goes without saying that fashion gives us a strong sense of confidence, which helps us to succeed in various aspects of life. According to a recent survey of the Fashion Institute of Technology, about 62.5% of job interview participants feel much more confident when they get dressed smartly and presentably. On top of that, it is assumed that being fashionable is a way to increase market vitality and promote social progress. On an individual level, fashion not only meets our needs for beauty on a daily basis but also brings color to our lives which helps us increasingly focus on the desire for beauty.
Another point worth noting is that fashion is transparent and reliable to reflect personal characteristics and attitude of life. Fashion can draw a total picture of ourselves whose aspects we want to show to other people. Furthermore, our religious beliefs are also expressed via our style. For instance, thanks to the way people dress Jilbab, we have an idea about where they come from, what they believe.
In conclusion, although it is said that the fashion industry negatively affects our lives, I believe that the merits of the fashion industry outweigh its demerits. Additionally, we should put more effort into this industry to improve our socio-economic development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03409090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83576048608 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7398680825 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228076436825 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745186235801 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533190463512 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136804836143 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048577219514 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.