In the ongoing debate about organizing children’s free time activities, it is argued that parents can effectively manage their child’s leisure activities thanks to their experience and maturity. While this may lead to numerous benefits, I am of the opinion that children have every right to decide what to do during their free hours without the influence of their parents.
On the one hand, parents are more experienced in terms of choosing what to do to get the most productivity out of their time. This is because before they became a mother or a father, they were also a teenager, just like their children. Thus, they are likely to comprehend what is going through their children’s minds and can design the most efficient timetable for them. For example, parents who have been through their adolescents would recognize the importance of fitness in a healthy lifestyle. As a result, they would foster a healthy living environment for their children by including sports activities in their free time.
On the other hand, children’s freedom is sacred and should not be controlled by those who bornt them. This restriction can deteriorate the youth’s critical thinking skill and make them become over-reliance on their family. Opponents of this idea may believe that if they do not monitor their sons or daughters, they can engage in deviant acts and ruin their future. However, this argument is not sound since it is the responsibility of the family to educate their children to stay away from such acts, not monitoring all the time.
In conclusion, although parents might be capable of creating a productive schedule during leisure time, I remain steadfast in my belief that the wishes of children about things they could do in their free time should be encouraged and not restricted by their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74570371469 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2470965777 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401257815108 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153386058784 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087531376848 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263791170737 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580122158388 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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