Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is a controversial issue that weather the history still should be prompted than science or technology, in the school time table. In my opinion, the history should be last on the demanding list.
First, the modern world, trend to be depend vastly on science-based practices. The new generation, is on the last stage of get rid of religious fundamentals and believes in the history. The education authorities already prioritised the scientific based subjects to the early school grades. A recent research of oxford university in united kingdom, reveal, the kids from age 5 to 10 are keen of observed and practical activities like science, but lesser in participating theoretical subjects, such as history. in addition, there is no doubt, that the new revolution has already begun on the topic of technology. Counties such as china and Japan already on the race on gaining millions of money by producing new product of technology, making the scientific adventure movies a real. Therefore, it is unfeasible to stop student learning the technology as a first subject in the class room.
Peoples who argue in favour of the opposite, continuously claim that, there is now future without knowing own history. Although history, as a study subject, is a boarded, it is still alive on time tables. It is the source of learning some ones own county values, such as culture, leaders, tradition values etc. this created a proud with patriotism of his own country and a sufficient knowledge of other counties. But the history should be optionl to the students who are keen of study deep into details as a higher study subject, that keep the balance of the student demand and removing accusations
In nut shell, I re-emphasise, that history should not be mandatory, but opened as a subject, expecting the highly valuable subjects, which makes the youth carriers into a brighter future both individually and a whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05047318612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8825317073 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.4949574835 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187566867781 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549897790184 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420386953009 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110758047645 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240851473487 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.