Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
There use conflicting opinions about Subjects. Few Individual argue that history is a necessary subject in school. whereas, others group of thinkers support that we should give more priority in innovative subject rather them history such as science and technology. However, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision. Both the opinion would be argued further.
Examining the Formal opinion, the Primary arguments to support this view point is we atleast know the basic knowledge about history. How people they live their life in past and we understand that what was happened in old days. For instance, history of India described that kingship democracy was there. Almost 100 year ago India was known as gold sparoow. In addition, they also believe that history shows us the basic Identity and heritage site of our nation. So basically heritage places are much important for civil engineers because they Learn from this place how the place was constructed and according to this they create more beautiful sculptures. Moreover, history provides valuable lesson's in Past. It shows what the mistake was done to past. Due to this we can learn from this mistake and create more successful nations.
On the contrary, the latter view point suggests that science and technological subjects are more important than historical. Learning this type of subject helps us to create more innovative ideas. For instance, these types of technological subjects describe the theory about how real time problems are solved with great methodology. Furthermore, the biggest benefits of learning science and technological subjects create a vast range of career opportunities. They are the foundation for careers In fields such as engineering, medicine, computer science, biotechnology and many more.
To conclude and give my opinion, i would say that later view-point is the most ideal way to deal with this situation. That would help to make life more easy, enhance our problem solving skill and help to develop our personal development skills.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...story is a necessary subject in school. whereas, others group of thinkers support that ...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the Past'?
Suggestion: in the Past
...over, history provides valuable lessons in Past. It shows what the mistake was done to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re. To conclude and give my opinion, i would say that later view-point is the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30886850153 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69486813145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9479459007 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8636363636 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263627779248 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707911571084 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613885174258 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15499922143 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660834361886 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...story is a necessary subject in school. whereas, others group of thinkers support that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the Past'?
Suggestion: in the Past
...over, history provides valuable lessons in Past. It shows what the mistake was done to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re. To conclude and give my opinion, i would say that later view-point is the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30886850153 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69486813145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9479459007 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8636363636 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263627779248 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707911571084 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613885174258 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15499922143 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660834361886 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.