Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
For fulfilling the ever-growing demand for residences, plants and forests are being destroyed continuously. It is claimed by some individuals that planting shrubs are more crucial than constructing habitats in the vacant territories of the urban area. This essay will argue why planting saplings are entirely necessary than building homes in empty places of towns.
To begin with, constructing buildings can provide human beings with safety, security, and shelter. In other words, as a roof over the head can save people from a wide range of calamities, housing is one of the fundamental requirement for humankind. Consequently, building more homes in empty spaces is a crucial way of meeting the demand of urban residences. For instance, In Bangladesh, almost 30% of the urban population are devoid of owning a home or having a shelter above the heads. Therefore, constructing buildings in unoccupied territories might be a solution to solve the accommodation problem of urban dwellers.
On the other hand, undeniably, the plantation is the most significant component for the survival of human civilization. Since trees and other plants are the primary source of oxygen, foods, energy, and also shelters, the plantation of sapling can be considered key to the existence of humanity. Moreover, by absorbing CO2 from the environments, it is continuously protecting the earth from destruction. To illustrate, logging is the primary reason for global warming and climate change, so that shrubs are required to be planted on the remaining vacant lands of cities instead of establishing residences so as to ensure the survival of human civilization. Furthermore, towns have already been turning out to be a concrete jungle. Thus, planting saplings in bare areas should be highly recommended for the existence of the planet.
In conclusion, despite the few advantages of establishing homes in the city regions, planting trees can be considered the single most critical elements for the presence of people on the earth. As far as I am concerned, I completely disagreed with the statement, and I think planting in all vacant land should be confirmed for creating a better planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32173913043 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10333682234 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553623188406 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.586263557 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161162691557 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527963484915 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465801080239 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104992600835 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356258720752 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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