Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
These days, public debate has been going on over whether the main environmental issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Some people argue that the currently century has more vital environmental problems. It is my firm conviction that there have seen some issues which have more negative impacts about environment than the loss of species of plants and animals.
Lacking of particular species of plants and animals has a wealth of merits. The first is some people who has professional work to kill animals have remark acting. Although governments abandon some law of animals, crimes still hunt a lot of valuable and rare animals. This action have given the serious happen is that nowadays over 1 in every 7 of special animals have been killing. The second issue of this problem is that, the loss of particular species of plants make ecosystem sharply decrease of quantity. Researchers assumed that if we have not serious rule about environment or some schedule in order to reduce the plants, ecological imbalances in our world would not develop, by contrast, it would be destroy.
On the other hand, having important problems about environment make our society must take care of. The environment witnessed the issue about pollution consist of air pollution, erosion of plant and it is sensible that disasters have more percentage than the past. In addition, following the number which reckon from researchers each year about flood, earthquake and tsunami, more than 63 percent was the number of these issue. It it continuous increase annual. Besides, the industry of one's country grow, by mean, it would be bring air pollution. In Vietnam, having 180 companies in yearly where produce some products to attend to demand of inside country are the main cause of air pollution. These companies have not ecosystem process to resolve some issue of air. As a result, air pollution have seen a significant increase in the future. This is remark that be need interested in.
In conclusion, on the basis the above discussion, I argue that there are more vital issues about environment. Accordingly, it would be advisable for governments and residents to look back on their actions in the past and now that help reduce these serious problems. The environmental issues merit further attention from both governments and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, if, look, second, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10051546392 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70053287885 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518041237113 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4220442046 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2380952381 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269704618122 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800092195241 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079890012136 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17329711679 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954138470642 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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