Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuses both these views and give yours.
There are different ideas for environmental problems, some views believe now a day loss of particular species of plants and animals are main problems, some others has opposite ideas and believe there are more important else. In this essay we are speaking about both views.
Some people insist on particular species of plants and animals are necessary for having practical environment. They accepted this two categories, have main rule for completing the life cycle in the environment. For example they believe although animals have major impact on environment and by themes it are working, they have insist particular species of animals are more necessary instead of regular animals. So they protect this type of animal until keep them alive. This issue is true for plants too. Most of scientist are working on particular species of plants and animals in different laboratory and protect areas which keeping rare species of plants and animals, to find the ways for helping them in front of died in during the time. Because some of themes are become the symbol, like rare Tigger in Iran who his name is Iran too.
Other people has opposite idea, they insist there are more important problems in the country in comparison with this two types for paying attention. In their views the economy issues, education, industry and so on have more priority for solving, because they said not only has this topic more effect on children’s life in the future, but also if government find best solution for improve themes they will change all category range age in during the time, so this problems are more necessary in front of the loss of particular species of plants and animals.
In my ideas both of views say right, although this problem about the loss of particular species of plants and animals in each country has important because by themes most of minerals are prepared and absolutely are needed in the future because they are finishing, but also finding correct ways for improving economy issues, education, industry are important too. Finally I thinks if each industry or in overall if government do their own rule in best way, all people problem will resolve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... impact on environment and by themes it are working, they have insist particular sp...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'insisted'.
Suggestion: insisted
...and by themes it are working, they have insist particular species of animals are more ...
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Line 2, column 749, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the themes') or simply say ''some themes''.
Suggestion: some of the themes; some themes
...ont of died in during the time. Because some of themes are become the symbol, like rare Tigger...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
...e in the future, but also if government find best solution for improve themes they will c...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tegory range age in during the time, so this problems are more necessary in front of...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the minerals') or simply say ''most minerals''.
Suggestion: most of the minerals; most minerals
...country has important because by themes most of minerals are prepared and absolutely are needed ...
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Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... education, industry are important too. Finally I thinks if each industry or in overall...
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Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
..., industry are important too. Finally I thinks if each industry or in overall if gover...
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Line 4, column 443, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...overall if government do their own rule in best way, all people problem will resolve. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, as for, for example, i think, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45286446908 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446280991736 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.496469373 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.769230769 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325568556844 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12170030445 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871256575584 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21874510885 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365581795006 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.