Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Environmental problems are some of the most pressing issues in modern society. Some argue that the most severe environmental problem is the extinction of flora and fauna. Others argue that there are more significant environmental problems. Therefore, these two points of view will be discussed in this essay.

Species of animals and plants are vanishing at an alarming rate all over the world. Forests are being cleared to make way for cattle farms, while endangered animals such as rhinos and bears are being poached. This unfortunate event happens because some ill-informed people believe in these animal body parts' healing and medical ability. This is a very stressful issue because it has such an enormous impact on humanity. For example, in the United States, deforestation has resulted in the loss of bee habitat, resulting in significant bee deaths, despite the fact that bees pollinate 70 of the top 100 human food crops.

Aside from the loss of species, there are other issues to consider. The main current environmental issues include ozone layer depletion, which has been suggested in numerous recent studies. This issue could be caused by CO2 gas and other chemicals emitted by factories. Ozone depletion can cause outbreaks of various chemical reactions, which can be harmful to organisms and the environment. The destruction of the ozone layer exposes the earth to solar radiation, which contains ultraviolet rays that cause cancer and other diseases. It also contributes to climate change, raising the overall temperature and melting polar ice.

To summarize, there are numerous ways in which humans are wreaking havoc on the planet, but it is difficult to say which is worse than the other because they end up with the same result. The only way to solve these issues is for people to raise awareness and limit harmful actions on the environment.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17491749175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68933362206 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2990418809 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235881999841 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739427546788 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579789777363 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14040309841 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816490127678 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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