Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of animals and plants. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
As the environmental quality is worsened of late, the causes of this negative development have always been a topic of public interest. People are divided over whether the disappearance of types of flora and fauna is the major issue or there are more imperative ecological concerns worth considering. While both viewpoints are justifiable, I personally lean towards the latter in light of the following reasons.
On the one hand, there are a couple of reasons accounting for the importance of animals and plants in daily life. Firstly, given the inextricable relationships between the human race and animals, it is absurd to downplay the disappearance of a specific animal. For example, pollinating animals such as bumblebees play the main role in pollinating and spreading the seeds of trees. Without them, many repercussions will be bred regarding agriculture production and farmers’ income. Secondly, plants’ photosynthesis helps produce oxygen which is the main source of life for many living creatures on Earth including humans. It is estimated that approximately 258 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide were converted to oxygen annually. Because of this, it is without a doubt that the fewer plants exist, the worse our air quality is.
On the other hand, advocates of the view in which other environmental problems are more urgent have their own rights. Specifically, the frequency of natural catastrophes is on the increase as a result of climate change. This may adversely affect the lives of humans, as well as their belongings. Moreover, the enormous energy consumption in production is also a major contributor to environmental problems. In fact, massive exhaust emissions released from the combustion of fossil fuels have catastrophically exacerbated air pollution. When the air pollution is poor enough, medical malady especially respiratory-related is unavoidable.
To conclude, despite the merits brought about by the presence of animals and plants, I can affirm that other environmental issues such as climate change and colossal exhausted fumes released are of greater concern due to their incomparable impact on humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50151057402 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21448731342 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6210422581 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183818459034 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446206602904 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563922359288 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916028460664 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181726137958 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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