Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to the booming of learning a foreign language, many people thinking that it is only for traveling or working in a foreign country, despite others think there are many more. In my view, though both of them are the main reasons, sometimes a native language could bring some huge advantages.
Learning a language besides the mother tongue brings a great deal for everyone. With them, you can speak with other native speakers of that language fluency, especially with partners. Next, it helps you get less trouble when traveling to various places from all around the world like France, Germany,... and have much fun time what you want from these trips. And not only that, foreign language means you have a higher chance to get hired from business companies and maybe got promoted too.
But benefits of learning is a lot more than just that. First, we can use a foreign language as a way to help foreign people to get to know about the country that we are living in like attractions, local foods, and whole more. Moreover, learning it can get you to understand the program, books or other types of media written by that language. Last but not least, if more and more people know that language than it could make attractions to thousands of people, making our country much more recognized in the worldwide.
To summarize, foreign language are needed in our lives due to its great benefits not only for yourself but also for the country and the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ll around the world like France, Germany,... and have much fun time what you want ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75590551181 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36780176809 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8115588202 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290676206661 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101359218764 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826947065793 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189377225345 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811635176547 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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