Some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happiness, but others argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness. Discuss both views and give your opinion
From the ancient time hitherto, humankind has been in pursuit of happiness. Although possessing precious things is somewhat some people believe that it gained happiness for them, personally, I am more likely to believe that something cannot be bought by money and strong arguments exists in support of both sides of this debate.
On the one hand, many people in modern civilization are materialists. It is irrefutable that money is extremely powerful in terms of fulfilling people’s desires such as fame or property. Meanwhile, it leads to the fact that people feel more comfortable and satisfied when they use their money to meet their needs which definitely bring them bliss. For example, people are constantly craving for social status; with money, they can easily upscale in the society as well as get respect from others which gained delight in the mind of these people. In addition, they can afford things under no pressure on making money to meet the basic needs which are defined as happiness for them.
On the other hand, others fundamentally agree that giving is receiving. By helping people and contributing to the society, they have a faith in achieving pleasure. For instance, non-profit organizations established in order to help those who are poor or disabled, these organization is run by devoting people who are trusting in happiness can be raised by supporting others. Besides, serving society helps them discover the inner beauty and make these people feel fulfilled and gratified. The sense of fulfillment shows that life is meaningful and marvelous.
In conclusion, with the reasons stated above, I am utterly convinced that happiness cannot be taken by money and what money brings is not a happiness but a satisfaction and selfishness of one following materialism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organization' or 'these organizations'?
Suggestion: this organization; these organizations
...to help those who are poor or disabled, these organization is run by devoting people who are trust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19655172414 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84951338233 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4035058653 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148862605627 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534747231181 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334265095206 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801982541879 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358485874572 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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