Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion
In this day and age, the significance of aesthetic values has been indifferent because of the era of computer and Information Technology, especially Artificial Intelligence is a phenomenon of the 21st modern age. Although some people believe that with the help of computer, public museums and art galleries would be no longer needed, personally, I disagree with the given notion and believe that online information can never replace the needs of having these existing exhibitions.
Firstly, museums and art galleries represent for the glory of particular country. These are places gathering achievement and experiences of ancestors which reflect the history of distinct nation. For example, in Vietnam, the Vietnam War museum displays the heritage and pictures of Vietnamese soldiers during the war between Vietnam and the US, which enables people to understand the glory history and appreciate the value of peace in the modern life. Moreover, these places also exhibit a vast number of paintings, handicrafts that contain a better quality of vision rather than watching behind the computer screen. It would have been seen in person to gain a real experience of observing artistic collections.
Secondly, museums and art galleries play a prominent role in the growth of tourism and economy. It has become apparent that museum and art galleries pool a sustainable growth of specific country as well as enhance human’s appreciation of art and literature. For instance, Vincent Van Gogh’s collections did not satisfy people’s spiritual and emotional needs at that time until he ceased to exist; his masterpieces gained the vast number of profits from exhibitions which merit an entry fee in his hometown. These exhibitions also attract the hordes of tourists all over the world which enrich the tourism as well as the wealth of this country. Thus, museums and picture galleries not only generate a huge revenue but also globalize local cultural knowledge.
In conclusion, museums and galleries are indispensable for each country. It seems to be hardly replaced by computer-based information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42987804878 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96579592922 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9606667918 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.214285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239710577121 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742019917313 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791663702042 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140328368632 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762671588951 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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