People have different views about whether people are healthier in modern days. Some opponents claim that individuals may have easily encounter an unhealthy lifestyle. Nevertheless, others believe that modernisation contributes to make people easy to be healthy life. In my opinion, I am in favor of the latter. This essay sheds light on both view points and supports my perception.
There are reasons why many think that the modern world may cause health problems. Firstly, many countries are becoming industrialized, which leads to the increasing number of factories and vehicles like cars, motorbike, and planes. Consequently, the more the amount of gas emission from those manufacturing plants and modes of transport are, the more polluted the air will become. In other words, mankind are living in heavily polluted air, resulting in the rise or appearance of new dangerous diseases such as lung cancer and heart broken. Secondly, sedentary working life may be an unavoidable result in the advanced technological development world. Employee who have been dependent too much on computers and the Internet do not have time to take up exercises, which is mainly responsible for stroke and obesity.
On the contrary, the proponents argue that human health can benefit from the development of modern society. First and foremost, thanks to advanced technology, medical research has been conducted successfully to find out the optimal medicine or most effective methods of treatment for certain diseases. Moreover, to have a healthy life, people can go to the gym or multifunctional rooms of doing exercises. With the support of modern machines in such places, individuals are able to choose from a variety of methods which is the best suitable for them. Last but not least, many food companies have scientists study and produce various kinds of healthy food and drink. Thus, inhabitants in these days are willing and able to feed themselves with those food and drink.
In conclusion, although modernisation is detrimental to people's health in some ways, it seems to me that people have had more opportunities to better their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'encountered'.
Suggestion: encountered
... claim that individuals may have easily encounter an unhealthy lifestyle. Nevertheless, o...
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Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...illing and able to feed themselves with those food and drink. In conclusion, although mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27352941176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8996644001 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6512181783 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272939871265 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728765893253 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065329493118 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159537256072 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702903591099 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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